The introduction was really good! The pictures were all interesting, transitions might have help keep the story going a little bit better. some parts in the story it was a little hard to understand some things were unclear. Music also would have helped the story too. I would grade this as a C+ because there weren't 10 bucket list ideas. Olivia Przeniczny, 4th hour
Dillion, You did an excellent job researching the topics you covered. Your voice quality was very good. Practice pronouncing unfamiliar words when you are unsure before you start recording. At the beginning you also has some nice transitions. No music -5 Copyright work cited was incomplete -5 Incomplete list -15
The introduction was really good! The pictures were all interesting, transitions might have help keep the story going a little bit better. some parts in the story it was a little hard to understand some things were unclear. Music also would have helped the story too. I would grade this as a C+ because there weren't 10 bucket list ideas.
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ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job researching the topics you covered. Your voice quality was very good. Practice pronouncing unfamiliar words when you are unsure before you start recording. At the beginning you also has some nice transitions.
No music -5
Copyright work cited was incomplete -5
Incomplete list -15